Perfect on Paper

6.2/10 · 1,214 ratings20141h 22mChristmasWeirdness 4/10Bingo card

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The premise

A book editor searches for Mr. Right while working with a high-maintenance author.

How unusual is it?

Middle of the road, with a twist — an enemies-to-lovers arc keeps it from being totally by-the-book.

Who’s in it

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Wait, what?

The quirks and curveballs that make this one a little weirder than your average Hallmark. No spoilers, promise.

  • The boyfriend's 'sub-lease' proposal is exceptionally cruel and weird for a Hallmark opening.
  • The recurring metaphor that 'King Kong was only three feet tall' as a lesson about LA appearances.
  • A serious editor being forced to do an author's pedicures as part of 'the creative process'.
  • The 'War of the Cornfield 1931' being treated as a potential blockbuster historical text.

Every trope, all in one place

Here’s everything this one has going on, from the setting to the way it wraps up. Tap any of the 28 to find more movies that do the same thing.

How it all plays out

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Full story (spoilers)
The film opens in Portland, where Natalie Holland is a dedicated editor of serious historical literature. Her life is upended when her boyfriend, Josh, reveals he is quitting his job to 'listen to the earth' in Machu Picchu and asks her to sub-lease his apartment instead of proposing. Seeking a fresh start, Natalie accepts a job offer in Los Angeles from her friend Avery. Upon arrival, she has a 'meet-cute' with Coop, who helps her find an apartment and claims to be a simple handyman and surfer. At work, Natalie is dismayed to learn her primary project is editing Beverly Wilcox, a legendary but notoriously difficult romance author. Beverly treats Natalie like a personal assistant, demanding she handle dry cleaning and pedicures while refusing any actual editorial feedback. Avery encourages Natalie to date men who are 'perfect on paper'—stable, successful, and ambitious. This leads Natalie to Bob Lewis, a charming lawyer she meets at a publishing gala. Bob seems to check every box on Natalie's list, and they begin dating. Simultaneously, Natalie continues to run into Coop, who mentors a young boy named Eli and runs a community garden. Natalie remains judgmental of Coop's lack of 'paper' credentials, unaware of his depth. The conflict peaks when Natalie tries to improve Beverly's latest manuscript by removing a repetitive character named Alfonso. Beverly is outraged and threatens to leave the publisher. It is later revealed that Bob Lewis is actually a rival publisher's scout; he manipulated Natalie's editorial integrity to frustrate Beverly so she would jump ship to his firm. When Beverly leaves, Avery's publishing house faces bankruptcy. Natalie realizes she was used by Bob and that her 'perfect on paper' philosophy led her astray. Eli eventually reveals to Natalie that Coop is actually John Cooper, a former Wall Street powerhouse who retired to Los Angeles to focus on philanthropy and community building. Natalie goes to Beverly to apologize and discovers that the author's real name is Margaret Bunn, a woman who originally wanted to write thrillers but was forced into the romance genre for success. Natalie convinces Margaret to reclaim her identity and publish her thriller, 'Alfonso's Web,' with Avery's firm. In the climax, Natalie prepares to return to Portland, feeling she failed, but Coop stops her. The film concludes with a successful book launch for Margaret Bunn, the announcement of a new partnership between Avery and Coop, and Natalie and Coop finally starting a relationship based on true character rather than a checklist.

Beat by beat

  1. Opening

    Natalie's boyfriend Josh refuses to propose and instead asks her to sub-lease his apartment before he leaves for Peru.

  2. Inciting Incident

    Natalie moves to LA and is assigned to edit the impossible diva romance author Beverly Wilcox.

  3. Midpoint

    Natalie begins dating Bob, a lawyer who is 'perfect on paper,' while dismissing the 'handyman' Coop.

  4. Climax

    Bob is revealed to be a corporate spy who manipulated Natalie into driving Beverly Wilcox away from Avery's publishing house.

  5. Twist

    Natalie discovers Coop is actually a wealthy former Wall Street executive and philanthropist.

  6. Resolution

    Natalie helps Beverly Wilcox reinvent herself as thriller writer Margaret Bunn, saving the publishing house and uniting with Coop.

28 tropes in one movie

We counted 28 distinct Hallmark tropes packed into this one — a genuine greatest-hits reel.

How it stacks up

Where this one’s rating lands against every other rated Hallmark movie.

Rating 6.2 vs every rated Hallmark moviemedian 6.4This movie · 6.2567

Higher-rated than 28% of every rated Hallmark movie. The median is 6.4.

Where this one fits

The corners of the catalog Perfect on Paper belongs to — handy if you’re after more of the same.

Lines worth quoting

The lines that stuck with us — the ones you’ll be repeating after the credits roll.

  • “Natalie Holland, will you do me the honor of sub-leasing my apartment?”
    — JoshWhen Natalie expects a marriage proposal after six months.
  • “In L.A., there are no simple parties.”
    — AveryExplaining the high stakes of the publishing gala.
  • “I chose two street names and reinvented myself as Beverly Wilcox.”
    — Beverly WilcoxExplaining how she abandoned her real identity to become a famous romance writer.

Meet the characters

Who’s who before you press play. Nothing here gives the ending away.

  • Natalie Holland

    Lead

    Book Editor

    PrincipledJudgmentalIntellectualOrganized
  • Coop (John Cooper)

    Love interest

    Philanthropist/Handyman

    Landlord and eventual boyfriend

    Secretly WealthyKindUnpretentiousMentor
  • Bob Lewis

    Antagonist

    Lawyer/Rival Editor

    Suitor and professional rival

    ManipulativeAmbitiousDeceptive
  • Beverly Wilcox (Margaret Bunn)

    Supporting

    Romance Novelist

    Editorial client

    DivaDemandingSecretly insecureTalented
  • Avery

    Supporting

    Publisher

    Best friend and boss

    StressedLoyalMatchmaker

Questions people ask about Perfect on Paper

How long is Perfect on Paper?

Perfect on Paper runs about 1 hour and 22 minutes, and was released in 2014.

Is Perfect on Paper a Christmas movie?

Yes. Perfect on Paper is a Hallmark Christmas movie, set during the holiday season.

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Our review

We watched Perfect on Paper so you don’t have to

Alanna sat through every minute of this one and recapped the whole thing — the plot holes, the chemistry, the parts that made no sense — over on the Talking Hallmark channel.

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